Insignificant bug

HELP THIS TOOK WAY TOO LONG TO FINISH
I think this took around 7 hours to make? a lot longer than most pictures i make
and tbh this does have two characters in it so im not that surprised

This is a redraw of this:
annnoel.deviantart.com/art/Thi…
(i miss pictures showing up hhh)
Ive been meaning to redraw this picture forEVER, but only got around to doing it recently
I think its crazy how much i managed to improve in the last two years

I'll write the story portion later, im tired and im sure I'll screw it up majorly if i try to write it now x-x

edit: I SCREWED UP THE WORDING ADFGJFLGHKDFJ
but now it is fixed so YAY

Edit 2: fixed some lighting on fflyleafs face